Sep 7, 2016 · Hey guys, my writing teacher is having me write an honest poem. Could you help me fix it or switch stanzas around? Thanks so much! I was born on October 24,

Nov 5, 2016 · A true beauty this poem is! I like the subtle rhyme between "thousand" and "surrounded" in the first 4 lines, that do not have rhyming ends. When rhymes arrive a little …

The rhyme is unwieldy at times, but the sheer energy and scope of the references hold the attention. I, for one, would like to see you try something like this unshackled to rhyme. Not that …

negligence a couple hundred years ago, killing one was abnormality. now, people are attacking, starting wars without mutuality. innocent children are dying,

Since then, several Zoners have been having a great old time turning out witty, usually rhyming pieces in this form. This poem is not a quadrisept, just sticks to four-syllable lines. It is actually …

Nov 20, 2016 · You paint a detailed picture here, spiteful and gloomy, in a very compelling form, showing of great rhyming skills bouncing up and down the rythmic flow of a ranting old man...

How to get more Feedback! So you have posted a poem, song or short story and want some feedback but aren’t getting any comments. We have all be there and it can be frustrating, I …